Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Throughout the history of humankind, people try to live better than their past life, but in the recent century, with progressing technology in every field, people feel more comfortable than their past life. Nowadays, a lot of facilities are constructed such as big hotels for passengers, high-tech hospitals, high-speed transportation and so forth to people using them to reach their daily goals with a high satisfaction and feel much pleasure. In my opinion, recently, people are living easier than when their grandparents were children, and explain my reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, with the increasing accessibility of people in cyber-space and using more computers and smartphone to make a connection between them are giving them much information and they are informed by immense data to solve their problems without any trouble. Typically, past people got information with many difficulties, to get reliable data about science or weather condition must devote many times to acquire those, on the other hand, in today’s, people find specific data with high comprehension without any doubt by clicking on their own computer screen and find it conveniently. For example, I was working on my term paper at the university, getting suitable articles around my title must read many books, however, by searching in the internet space in a few minutes I found many articles relate to my term project.
Secondly, when my grandparents were children, they used horses and their feet to commute between two points. On the contrary, nowadays, many people get public and individual transportations to reach their destinations. By advancing technology, many ways were invented to transport people in the large cities and even between cities. With this regard, every person has many choices to take an appropriate vehicle for traveling, some people prefer to use cheap ways, such as bike or motorcycle or public transportation, also some people prefer to make comfortable ways but high cost such as individual cars and airplanes. Therefore, all people are freedom to choose a compatible way with their life condition to transport and they never are restricted by elementary ways used by past people. For instance, my city has substantial ways to near cities such as public transportations, airplanes, and swift trains. People in my cities are fulfilled when confronted with various opportunities, also some elder people who experienced old transportation are saying to us that you must appreciate technology with these benefits.
All in all, in the recent century, technology development provides a context for people that they feel more comfortable than when their grandparents were children. Therefore, people living this time not only find specific information in every context, but also use the variety of transportation options to get the sense of convenience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are never
...ir life condition to transport and they never are restricted by elementary ways used by p...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38444444444 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05450486986 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517777777778 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1860200725 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.533333333 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172387911943 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723243807742 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950099084498 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128588267964 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728143050016 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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