Life today is more esier and more confortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Do you agree or desagree?
In our modern society, it is very usual to see groups of elderly people complaining about today’s way of life , but I think the opposite to this. I strongly believe that life has become easier and more comfortable than in the past years. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, technology advances has greatly contributed to make our lives more comfortable even in small tasks, such as washing and drying clothes, cooking, or giving us possibilities to receiving orders like food and medicine without leaving home. However, nothing compares to the benefits brought to medicine. An evidence for my statement is that couple of weeks ago I read an article saying that the scientists finally found the cure for AIDS. How many people have died fighting against this life-threatening disease? Twenty years ago, this discovery would not be possible.
Another point I would like to make which supports my argument is about communication. Globalization has broken down all communication barriers. Today we can talk to people around the world in a blink of the eye. This advancement in our telecommunications networks has made it possible to exchange information in a short period. In my grandfather’s time, communication between people occurred through letters that could take weeks to reach their destination. The only way to hear the news from other countries, was by visiting the big cities or finding people who came back from traveling abroad.
Finally, there has been a lot of improvements in the transportation field. It gets easier and easier to move to one place to another. Nowadays we have more intelligent cars, airplanes, ships, trains, and by its computer based systems their locomotion speed has increased frequently, leading to a global population willing to explore the most diversity destinies in the world.
In conclusion, despite the fact that in old times life was calm and people would have more time to execute their daily tasks more carefully, I strongly agree that breakthrough technology has collaborates for a more comfortable and easier way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19540229885 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05311044727 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7730854182 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145335721579 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361931702914 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615993790677 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895396797225 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748478188994 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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