Many democratic countries report low voter turnout in people aged 18-25. Why do you think many young people are not voting?
I think that there is low voter turnout for people aged 18-25 for two reasons. First, I think that young people in stable, democratic countries do not feel like their government affects their lives. Secondly, I think that many young people who would be politically active are not because they don't believe that any one government would be better or less corrupt than another.
When a country has been at peace - at least on home soil - and relatively stable for a generation or more, I believe that the children of that country become apathetic about their government. Young people in these countries have not seen dictatorships and have not had to fight an enemy in their streets. Many young people, certainly those of the middle and upper class, have never experienced hunger, lack of shelter or any other major hardships outside of their family and friends. They may believe that the government is not really doing much, so they do not pay much attention to politics.
On the other hand, young people in democratic countries who do care about and pay attention to politics may be jaded. These young people may not believe that it makes any difference at all which political party is leading the country because all political parties are equally corrupt. In other words, there is no reason to vote - it is simply a waste of time.
I believe that governments of democratic countries need to do more to reach out to youth and try to convince them that their vote actually does count for something, and can affect change.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, at least, i think, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80608365019 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47021948094 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6063806295 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337437733284 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127473324474 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879742079712 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199236749039 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114481141626 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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