Many important historical figures have served in the United States with dignity and empathy for the country. Some people believe that Martin Luther King and John Kennedy are the most known leaders for what they did during the time that they were serving. While others argue that they are not the only ones who contributed widely in order to keep the States united. Personally, I think that another historical figure that had the same importance as Martin Luther King and John Kennedy was the 16th president of the United States, Abraham Lincoln.
One of the reasons that Abraham Lincoln was so influential in the history of the United States is because he fought for the human rights of slaves and ended slavery. If Lincoln didn’t address the slavery problems, then the States might have faced many difficulties that
would have challenged the freedom of the entire country. Even though he fought for the end of slavery and implemented law, it wasn’t welcomed by many people who lived in the South. Still with his determination for solving this situation, he was successful in ending slavery in America. Because of this, Abraham Lincoln remains one of the most the important historical figures.
Another reason is that Abraham Lincoln continued to preserve the Union during the U.S. civil war between the North and the South.If the United States wouldn’t have considered the emancipation proclamation then the civil war wouldn’t have ended and it would have ultimately divided the country.
Even though Lincoln supported the Union, which opposed slavery, he ended up assassinated from people that disagreed with his ideas.
Because of his determination to keep united the north and the South, Lincoln is going to be remembered forever in the history of the country.
In summary, Lincoln is a key figure in the American history.He will be remembered as a president who ended slavery, while preserving the Union between the south and the north.
Many important historical figures have served in the United States with dignity and empathy for the country. Some people believe that Martin Luther King and John Kennedy are the most known leaders for what they did during the time that they were serving. While others argue that they are not the only ones who contributed widely in order to keep the States united. Personally, I think that another historical figure that had the same importance as Martin Luther King and John Kennedy was the 16th president of the United States, Abraham Lincoln.
One of the reasons that Abraham Lincoln was so influential in the history of the United States is because he fought for the human rights of slaves and ended slavery. If Lincoln didn’t address the slavery problems, then the States might have faced many difficulties that
would have challenged the freedom of the entire country. Even though he fought for the end of slavery and implemented law, it wasn’t welcomed by many people who lived in the South. Still with his determination for solving this situation, he was successful in ending slavery in America. Because of this, Abraham Lincoln remains one of the most the important historical figures.
Another reason is that Abraham Lincoln continued to preserve the Union during the U.S. civil war between the North and the South.If the United States wouldn’t have considered the emancipation proclamation then the civil war wouldn’t have ended and it would have ultimately divided the country.
Even though Lincoln supported the Union, which opposed slavery, he ended up assassinated from people that disagreed with his ideas.
Because of his determination to keep united the north and the South, Lincoln is going to be remembered forever in the history of the country.
In summary, Lincoln is a key figure in the American history.He will be remembered as a president who ended slavery, while preserving the Union between the south and the north.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, while, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17757009346 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62625506595 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4477762233 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417473230905 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163429798754 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19731533644 0.0737576698707 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173105402917 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239158563926 0.0645574589148 370% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.