Traveling is one of the best activities people can do because there are an infinite amount of things and places that other cultures have made up. As far as I am concerned, people who visit museums while traveling are doing this because they want to know about the place’s history. I cling to this outlook because of two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, meeting the roots of any place, you will be able to enjoy the essence of this place. among the roots, there are cultures, languages, and things developed by the ancient inhabitants which just could be truly found in a museum. To clarify my point, let me take my last trip as an example. I traveled to Quito –the capital of Ecuador-. First, a friend from Quito show me around, but he told me that what he really appreciates of Quito is its history, so we decided to go to a museum so-called “Museo de Cera” where I found out why Quiteña people wear in a particular way, it was because when Spanish people conquered Quito, they force Quiteños to use their attires, if not they would be punished. This is how a museum makes you understand some particular features of the places you visit.
Secondly, people usually go to the museums first because they are curious about what happened in the past with this city. There are wars the city or place has undergone in past times which have left inhospitable areas. One example of this is Japan, I went to Japan I was warned of not going to Yakutami –a high-radioactive area-. So, I decided to go to a nearby museum to understand what happened there, the thing is that the US threw two nuclear bombs which produce high-radioactivity leaving the place totally death. It was so interesting to know about this place that I decided to explore the place but authorities did not allow me. This is how I acknowledged a great war success in Japan just by going to a museum.
To sum up, when you are traveling go first to a museum, thus you will understand everything you go through during the trip.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...le can do because there are an infinite amount of things and places that other culture...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Among
...ble to enjoy the essence of this place. among the roots, there are cultures, language...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58967391304 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63495473815 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546195652174 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4542849922 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228240979284 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756859823472 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731249865162 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153518857602 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420220054885 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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