Many people visit museums when they travel to new places.Why do you think people visit museums?Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.
Museums are places where we get a glimpse of our past. Different museums present across the globe tell us important
and interesting facts about "how we were" and "how was the world". Museums are important tourist attractions in the cities
they are situated.Some famous museums like The Louvre Museum in Paris attarcts thousands of visitors from across the world
everyday and the same happens for many other museums present across the globe.
Many types of people visit museums and each one of them has a definite objective. Based on objective the people visiting
musems can be roughly divided into three categories. The first group contains those people who visit museums mostly because
they are students of history, archeology etc or are reserchers. For example a person trying to infer about the origin of
the famous painting Mona Lisa is very likely to visit Louvre Museum just to see the Mona Lisa painting and study it in detail.
The second group consists tourists who visit museums mainly because museums are interesting tourism spots. Among the tourists most
people just take a walk around the museum only taking a glimpse of the attarctive looking paintings and statues while
some of them stop by each painting and object to study it a bit closely. For example a person who hated history as a student
will visit Louvre Museum on visiting Paris only because it is a very famous tourist attarction or he might be forced by his companions
to do so.Such people will generally not take much interest in the different objects displayed in the museum and will only
look at each may be some objects casually. On the other hand a person who takes little but some interest in history
on visiting Paris will visit Louvre museum and will try to know about the different objects that are present in the museum.
The third group consists of art student who visit museums to sketch the various beautiful artifacts and paintings that are
present in the museums.
These are the mainly the different types of visitors that are seen in a museum.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.157024793388 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0440771349862 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0358126721763 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123966942149 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36347482557 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192837465565 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123966942149 0.0887237588012 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220385674931 0.0209618222197 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.030303030303 0.0139019557991 218% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2058.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89684813754 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378223495702 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255014326648 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137535816619 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0744985673352 0.112833075102 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36347482557 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472779369628 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 48.6312630347 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8461538462 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4650613025 48.84282405 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.307692308 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.5376344086 397% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.3475865109 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.8023255814 1.45489161554 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166539141481 0.300154397459 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167407471545 0.103427244359 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.121668734137 0.0752933317313 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770040912304 0.497263757937 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204357379278 0.151897553556 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915388030114 0.114077575197 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051370771943 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.131863077559 0.336927656856 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0627914024365 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770366148584 0.210909579961 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047576759288 0.0618886996521 77% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.