Television become a biggest medium of new ideas, current affairs and it is full time entertainment also. Television is a one of the great invention of science and technology. It was introduce with the intention of providing information of about the country and light entertainment which was not possible with radio. but like others, television also has two side, good and bad. now a days movies and television have many side effect on society and especially on youth.
Young peoples spend their crucial hours in watching movies and television.they waste their 4 to 5 hours everyday in seeing movies which can be given to their studies to get good grades. Unfortunately our these grown ups are busy in admiring these false entertainment.for example, one of my friend was very good at studies during his school times but after joining college he got addicted to watching movies and he became careless about his future. The result of his bad habit was poor grades in semester which make him realize how terribly he was making fun of his carrier but it was too late and there is no look back.
The television world take away social life of the young ones. Spending many hours with television will cut the connection of a person with other. Rather they can enjoy with friends and family and spend quality time.
I want to explain this point with a small example the 20 year son of my brother is suffering from depression because he was great television and movies lover and because of it he did not have any friends and he was not able to give input to his job also.
To compete with this rapidly growing world, young brigade must have focus on new technology and concepts required for their personal as well as national growth because national growth always depends upon the new idea and theories which will be generated in these new minds and this will be possible if youngsters utilize their time carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
Television become a biggest medium of new ideas, current af...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...of new ideas, current affairs and it is full time entertainment also. Television is a one...
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Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...fairs and it is full time entertainment also. Television is a one of the great inven...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
...ntion of science and technology. It was introduce with the intention of providing informa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ment which was not possible with radio. but like others, television also has two si...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...vision also has two side, good and bad. now a days movies and television have many ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...vision also has two side, good and bad. now a days movies and television have many side ef...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...elevision.they waste their 4 to 5 hours everyday in seeing movies which can be given to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
... the connection of a person with other. Rather they can enjoy with friends and family ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e was not able to give input to his job also. To compete with this rapidly growin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gsters utilize their time carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78313253012 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55281701809 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0684913666 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18728987567 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781439868216 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780113049068 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1035648504 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500212164828 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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