Movies and television have negative impacts on young people. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some people argue that movies and television have negative impact on young people, they say that, movies are always misleading and guide them to wrong paths. However, I strongly disagree with these people and believe that, media and televsion are useful resources to guide young people to show them clear and defined good ways of doing things. I will support my view point with two reasons, which I will explore in following paragraphs.
First of all, movies and television positively impact the young people. Young people always try to follow their heros or characters who are always doing good things like fighting the negativity in the society. Drawing from my own experience, when I was a kid, I always tried to replicate my favourite super hero character, Mr.RC. He always fights evil people who hurts others and gives helping hand to the needy. If this show wasn't telecasted, I wasn't sure if I would understand what helping others means. So, it is important for children or young people to be exposed to positive messages because they are highly influenced at young age. Thus, media and television are actually beneficial to the young people.
Secondly, movies and televison are a great sources of entertainment to those who can't go out regularly or for introverts. For example, my nephew, who is 14 years old then, has some skin issues. He can't go around during day time, he will get burns when exposed to sun. Then he started watching movies and televsion, which impacted him highly, and he was inclined towards a tv show which conducts interviews about different people and their behaviours. Now he started conducting interviews related to televesion show at his home itself. If media wasn't there, we weren't aware how my nephwe would have picked his career. So, it is important to get exposed to media and television, as they might result in picking the careers to young people if they are interested. Thus, media is of greater usage to young people.
To conclude, the issue of whether children should watch significant movies and television is complex. Some have suggested that their viewing time should be reduced because they affect the eye sight of young people. Nevertheles, I still contend that moves and television are completely advantagesous to young children and have encouraging effect on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00516795866 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57985717714 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547803617571 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2583065355 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320152494591 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920181828739 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927216617781 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208214998903 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772658550373 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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