Technology is a great invention. Television is one such invention, watching it makes people entertained and joyful. Kids today grow up spending more time on television than with their parents. From which it seems evident that television and movies can strongly influence on how a person will behave. I also feel this way and I shall elaborate more about it in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, children today has a broader mindset than those during the times of our parents. Our kids today have more understanding capabilities and some become intellectual at a very young age. We can see a 5-year-old kid speaking very fluent English without needing to enroll himself in school. This has all happened because of television and movies.
Secondly, with the western culture broadcasted in the movies, people tend to absorb themselves in those cultures. Eating in a Vietnamese and Korean restaurants to getting into night clubs are all because of the influence of television and movies. People are experiencing and learning new things in their lives, thanks to television and movies.
In contrast, television can also have bad influence on people. People indulging themselves into substance abuse, gang fights and even domestic problem are some of the pressing issues television has brought in. A youngster feels that taking drugs and involving in a gang fight is cool, since an action hero has portrayed himself the same in a movie. A husband or a wife can get into an extra marital affair with an idea they can grasp from movies.
In conclusion, for every pro there is a con. It is about how an individual gets influenced by it. While some people take a greater advantage of developing themselves personally and professionally through television and movies, few people do it the other way round.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ng fights and even domestic problem are some of the pressing issues television has brought ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80464646023 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8564130267 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8421052632 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169930247597 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525789282234 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510448225961 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100720890687 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535032712531 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ng fights and even domestic problem are some of the pressing issues television has brought ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80464646023 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8564130267 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8421052632 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169930247597 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525789282234 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510448225961 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100720890687 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535032712531 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.