Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-Someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Life is changing quickly and the population ratio increased drastically. In this modern society it becomes very rare to have a neighbors who is supportive and encouraged. In my opinion, the supportive neighbor is the best to have because they can be able to assist us whenever we need and we can have a very strong friendship relation with them as I will explain in this essay.
To begin with, no one can deny how supportive neighbor can influence our-life positively to success. Individual nowadays having a hard time to cope with their neighbors in same environment they lived. By time, the neighborhood relation diminished severely. Besides, supportive neighbor who’s get our back when needed is the most important element to have a happy and healthy life. Talking about my neighbor as an example, I do still remember the last couple of weeks when I struggled to get a high score in Toefl test, I got the support from my neighbor who’s an English teacher when she got my back to push me to achieve my dream’s score. Consequently, she gave me a variety of subjects to practice on and many strategies to follow during the test also, she sent me a lot of videos to watch and subscribe. As a result, I invest my time and energy to make her proud of me and get a high score.
Secondly, strong bond-relation between individuals can enhance the whole society especially in this modern life which everything is luxurious we lived. People in recent decays don’t have enough time to spend chatting, talking or even knowing the neighbor next to their door so; get support and encouragement can lead to trustworthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a neighbor' or simply 'neighbors'?
Suggestion: a neighbor; neighbors
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wing the neighbor next to their door so; get support and encouragement can lead t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, still, talking about, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83928571429 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85744418054 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0895165566 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157259208291 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059154401332 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601457163667 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11430653849 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500282819392 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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