The food industry has influenced our relationship with aliments in several ways. One of the biggest inovations of this industry was the facility to prepare many kinds of foods that are already processed. This innovation raises discussions, since there is people that support this innovation and other ones that doesn’t see positive benefits in it. Personally, I am in the second group, considering that this behavior towards food resulted in healthy problems and uncontrolled consumption of resources.
One might argue that food industry allowed to make life a little more comfortable trough the creation of many sorts of food aliments that are very easy to prepare. A couple of minutes in a microwave are all that takes to have the next lunch, allowing busy people to save some time and in many cases to be some economy. In this context, people that support this kind of food might use this example as a demonstration that food easy to prepare have benefits to our modern society, since it is practical and help to saves money.
However, this is only one side of the coin. While it might have some positive aspects in the fact that food has become easier to be prepared, the problems related to it are bigger than the positive aspects. The health problems are one of these negative aspects. In many supermarkets it’s cheaper to buy processed food that only needs a couple of time to be ready for be consumed than aliments that requires some effort to cook it. In general, these types of easy to be prepared food are not healthy and generates serious consequences in people that consumes it in an abusive way. For instance, in United States, there are high levels of obesity between teenagers which is a health problem related with the abusive consumption of fast food. Moreover, this type of industrialized food are poisonous for the body in other ways, causing increase in cholesterol levels and effecting the heart.
Moreover, this type of food can result in prejudices for environment, since it is related with uncontrolled consumption of resource. For instance, when someone buys a certain food that is already prepared and only takes a few minutes to ready to eat, in general we are talking about an aliment that doesn’t require dishes and other acessories to be consumed. These generates high levels of garbage, which includes a high amount of plastic and other elements been discarded in the nature without any treatment. The industry have been not able to recycle this amount of garbage that has been produced by fast foods and other similar types of food.
To conclude, one might see some positive aspect in the fact that food nowadays has become easier to prepare. However, this changed in a bad way our relationship with what we eat. We lack a better contact with the food, which generates a series of health problems and also results in huge impacts in our environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'save'.
Suggestion: save
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Message: Consider replacing "in an abusive way" with adverb for "abusive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...consequences in people that consumes it in an abusive way. For instance, in United States, there ...
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rol levels and effecting the heart. Moreover, this type of food can result in prejud...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...asier to prepare. However, this changed in a bad way our relationship with what we eat. We l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in general, kind of, talking about, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91463414634 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6553989341 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447154471545 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8602263625 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213770613135 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702237095286 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541498072446 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135858843968 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402266146643 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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