Movies or films have changed over the past few years, and some of them are based on books. While some people prefer to watch the movie first, others like to finish the book and vice versa. Personally, I believe watching the movie is much more preferable in different aspects. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
People who watch movies instead of reading books saves a lot of time. When I want to read a book, I have to spend at least ten hours to finish 150 pages. On the other hand, turning on the television, searching for a movie, and watching it. It takes three hours at much. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was studying English as a second language, my teacher assigned an assignment to read a book called the old man and the sea. I did not read it until the night before discussion class. I started to read, and after three hours I just finished 50 pages out of 160. So, I searched on the internet and I found a movie for this book. It took from me 5 minutes to set it up. I watched the movie. As a result, I was able to discuss all the book with the class. As you can see, If I had not watched the movie, I would not have saved time and participated in class.
In addition to saving time, people who watch movies saves money. While a movie is usually cost five to twenty dollars, there is no limit to the cost of a book. For instance, when I want to watch a movie, I just turn my television and choose a movie between thousands because I have a subscription for Netflix, which cost me only $8 monthly for the unlimited watch. On the contrary, buying a book cost me $10. Consequently, I watch hundreds of stories by watching the TV, but only one story by reading a book.
Frankly speaking, if you do not have time and money, you can watch a movie instead of reading a book. But, also the books are not changeable with movies because it has a different taste.
To conclude, I strongly believe that watching movies is much more practical. This is because not only it saves my time, but also it saves my money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, frankly, if, second, so, while, at least, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27386934673 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37458987061 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494974874372 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5969395301 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4230769231 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88709677419 368% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440578070487 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120449682062 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913650823178 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244720012829 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955906991198 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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