Nowadays people are busy with many things If you were given a short period of time what would you choose Learn to play a new sport you never played Learn to cook food in a different way a Learn to do some hand made work like clothes | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

Nowadays, people are busy with many things. If you were given a short period of time, what
would you choose:
 Learn to play a new sport you never played
 Learn to cook food in a different way
a
 Learn to do some hand-made work like clothes

Nowadays, one confronts many different choice that he can make in order to incrase their life’s meaning. In this regard, while some people believe that it is wiser to spend time playing sports, others find doing hand-made works more appealing. Personally speaking, I think that learning to cook in a different manner is a better alternative. I have several reasons for my choich, which I will explain in the following essay.

First and foremost, cooking in a different way can bring happiness to one’s life. To be specific, with development of technology, most people feel bored when they do regular tasks or household chores. Life has lost its meaning, and in the process of finding a meaning we get depressed since we do not know what should we do. In this regard, something very simple such as cooking food in different way can be one of the many tasks which brings some interest to one’s world. In addition, cooking better food may result in a feeling of satisfaction and enjoyment in family members. As we all know, family bond is also crucial in forming one’s feeling which in this can is positive. Ultimately, I think that adding something creative to one’s life can result in happiness in the long run.

Furthermore, cooking in a different make people become a better cook in the long run. Whether people cook in a professional matter or they just do it out of curiosity or obligation, one thing is for sure: trying out different receipes can make one highly knowledgeable to such a degree that no one can compete with that. In addition, choosing different ingredients for food can result in one’s creativity. This is also useful for making one a better cook since they may create completely new receipes out-of-the-box.

In sum, with all these taken into account, I do believe that trying out new ways of cooking is profitable on the grounds that it makes one’s feeling better. Also, it results in one’s mastery in cooking which is of high importance. I hope that we do not be afraid of trying out new things in our lives and we fight with these fears.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, one confronts many different choice that he can make in order to inc...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...speaking, I think that learning to cook in a different manner is a better alternative. I have several...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g essay. First and foremost, cooking in a different way can bring happiness to one’s life. To b...
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Line 3, column 667, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...forming one’s feeling which in this can is positive. Ultimately, I think that addi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, i think, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78670360111 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66715995417 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504155124654 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.687578212 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175749993144 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633862562944 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453733965164 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122007779607 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386753876077 0.0645574589148 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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