In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
In the past, radio and newspaper are popular and common media for people to know current events. Differently, with the inventions of technology, there are various different news sources, such as Internet and television. Therefore, a person must get information from different ways.
For students, nowadays, we usually use email and social media to acquire campus new staff. Since it is prevlent to see students use mobile phone to send and receive massages, schools mostly announce students all kinds of things. For example, our school inform us by daily emails, radio programs some social medias and school newspapers. Therefore, I can know sports activities and concerts from school newspapers and then know whether these activities will be conceled and changed through daily emails. If I do not pay attention to vary information sources, I would or miss something important for me.
For businessmen, being mindful to specific news approaches enable them to receive the crucial information. With the limited of generic information resources like newspaper, it is difficult for businessmen to get to useful commercial and financial information. For instance, my father is a financial manager. He reads the magazine called Economic weekly, which provides him with the latest news about finance. Consequently, with the help pf these specific information, he can make a better decision in the matter of finance management.
For teachers, acquiring information from different sources help them become more well-informed and knowledge. As teachers, it is exceedingly necessary for them to update their knowledge and keep learning. Only choosing various ways to receive information can they are exposed to new knowledge better. For example, my geology teacher not only watch documentary involving geology to study this subject but also be concerned to magazines to know the latest researches. Therefore, she frequently shares extra geology knowledge with us.
In a word, if we just rely on one news source to keep informed, we would likely miss most of significant messages. Depending on a number of news sources can give us more information, which extremely meets our demands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41470588235 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91651276575 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3339743522 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.05 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222890974778 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067909720182 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986833547929 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127995341838 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843579846755 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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