Renewable sources of energy will soon replace fossil fuels.
Energy is one essential kind of source for people’ daily life. Without energy, it will be extremely difficult for people. Nowadays, people tend to increasingly use renewable energy, such as solar energy and moving water. Therefore, I strongly believe that renewable sources of energy will take the place of fossil fuels as the principal source of the world energy in the near future.
First, an advancement the technology makes it possible to explore and employ new forms of energy. With tremendous breakthrough of relative technologies, scientists have been gradually going through the challenges and difficulties of developing renewable energy. In the past, we were dependent to employ the fossil fuels like gasoline, which has been providing us with more benefits. Contrast to in the past, now we have more choices. Thanks to the use of moving water and wind energy, most families are able to try these renewable sources. My family had already used solar energy to home heating. In fact, more and more families and companies start to use like solar energy that kind of energy.
Secondly, unlike renewable sources of energy, fossil fuels is exceedingly non-renewable. They are limited in supply and will one day be depleted. From the past to the present, we are going to run out of fossil fuels and we have no choice but to prepare for the new age of energy production. As is known to us, it takes a long time to form usable coals and oil from plants and animals. Meanwhile, we particularly rely on fossil fuels and use them frequently. From the past to the present, we are going to run out of fossil fuels and we have no choice but to prepare for the new age of energy production. Since , most certainly, human demands for energy will not decrease.
Finally, burning fossil fuels releases gases and harmful particles which causes air pollution. Particularly, air pollution results in smog and the degradation of human health and plant growth. On the contrary, renewable sources benefit us a lot. We do not exactly need to worry about whether it will generate toxic gases. Take Beijing as an example, recent years, the smog has become far more serious which has an obvious and critical effect on people’ life. According to a number of investigations, smog is a direct result of using much coals and oil in daily life. Consequently, a mass of various harmful particles and gases are emitted, leading in crucial air pollution. An effective way to change such phenomenon is to make use of renewable sources of energy.
In a word, fossil fuels which have shown many disadvantages .At the same time, the rising popularity of new energy and the improvement of technologies will make it affordable and will substitute for the conventional fossil fuels sooner or later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in fact, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95074946467 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76382095305 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48608137045 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7050688806 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6296296296 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2962962963 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48148148148 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274473113497 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806548519453 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825734999514 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180759586121 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884662631584 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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