The best way for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young

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The best way for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young.

Many people thinks children should freely enjoy their childhood and do care much about the future, because it is still long enough for them to be concerned about their future. However, I strong believe that we should not just enjoy ourselves but do some plan and preparation when we are young, so that we can have a good future.
Planning carefully when we are young can have us make best use of our childhood. It is known to us, childhood is a best period where people are able to acquire knowledge and various skill faster. certainly, we are supposed to take full advantage of this time. For example, my aunt sent her son to all kinds of training center, such as English and speaking courses. Attending these interesting courses helps my cousin cultivate the essential and useful abilities. Consequently, thanks to his perfect English, he got a well-paid job in a big company.
Doing some earlier plans for our future when we are young enables us to have a solid fundamental knowledge and skills. With basic abilities, we can have an excellent performance in our job, leading to successful career. as my cousin, he has to attend a verity of meetings and does many presentations on these meetings. If he did not do some training on speaking, he would spend the large amount of time practicing his speaking. As the same time, he is also necessary to do great preparation with his project. Fortunately, thanks to his good speaking skill which was developed when his was a kid, he saved much time and did best to his tasks. As a result, his wonderful performance left good impression on his leaders and he was offered promotion soon.
With a careful plan, we can stick to our dream persistently. The majority people have a dream when they were young like being a teacher or a doctor in the future. If they do some specific preparation for their dreams, they would increase the chances of achieving their dreams. For example, my brother eagerly wanted to a doctor when he was a child. In order to make his dream come true easily, he went to the local hospital as a volunteer on weekends. During the periods of working, he not only had a higher awareness of responsibility, but also learned something about caring. In fact, the experience gives efficient help when he did some medical research. Ultimately, he became a doctor successfully.
In a word, we can benefit much from have some plan when we are young, such as enriching our childhood, establishing a solid basic knowledge and keeping on pursuing our dreams, which surely make a great contribution to our future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...d about their future. However, I strong believe that we should not just enjoy ourselves...
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...carefully when we are young can have us make best use of our childhood. It is known to us...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ldhood. It is known to us, childhood is a best period where people are able to ac...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certainly
...ire knowledge and various skill faster. certainly, we are supposed to take full advantage...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... our job, leading to successful career. as my cousin, he has to attend a verity of...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a great contribution to our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, well, as to, for example, in fact, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75223214286 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71574557634 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2393549094 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7083333333 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20935241576 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606656107811 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755323089675 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125147013136 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220105583413 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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