People benefit from travelling in their own countries rather than from travelling abroad.
We live one life and travelling is one of the ways to enjoy it. Overall, any kind of travelling is an exciting event. However, personally, I am prone to believe that travelling abroad is more advantageous. I hold this opinion since it enables to visit new sites, meet new people and get familiar with the principles of organization of the states we visit.
To begin with, travelling abroad is an excellent opportunity to see new places. That may be unfamiliar cities, towns, or even buildings and streets. Travelling in your own country, on the other hand, does not provide these possibilities because, generally, people visit various places of their motherland since their childhood and in adulthood they have nothing new to see. For example, I live in a state called Armenia - a beautiful place, though, with small territory, equivalent to 29,000 square kilometres. My family and I know all the native cultural and historical attractions and we even have managed to visit them for several times. Thus, travelling abroad is a chance to see new sights and get pleasure from them.
Additionally, new places that we visit are populated by people it is worth to get to know. Meeting new people is a part of our life and a quite enjoyable one. When we see new people, talk to them we realise the diversity of the world. Moreover, we learn a lot of new things from them. For instance, when I visited the United States I met a lot of people who were more organized and disciplined than I am. To my surprise, they were working all day long and at the same time they were managing to find time for leisure, too. So, we do benefit from getting to know new people in countries where we had not been earlier.
Finally, we would definitely benefit from getting familiar with the basic principles of the functioning of foreign states. It would be useful to know whether there is a constitution in the state, what are its main foundations, what kind of bodies there are in the country and how they operate. This is explained by the fact that we try to change things in our homelands permanently, and it would be preferrable to make these alterations with regard to relevant international experience. For instance, when the constitution of my country was being drafted most of our citizens were active in discussing its various aspects since they were aware of the foundations of other countries where they had been before. In other words, travelling abroad gives us knowledge about national states which may be of use.
To sum up briefly, travelling abroad gives us a lot of pleasure and knowledge since we attend new sites, meet new people and learn about the organization and functioning of the states / we visit./
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76759061834 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75648466808 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490405117271 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0982422266 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2173913043 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3913043478 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26086956522 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242495501292 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763565175909 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673859439104 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142407941551 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360510945798 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.