It is commonly acknowledged that more and more emphasis is put on natural environment as people are getting into the sense of protecting it. Therefore, citizens are taking effective measures to improve the environment. When asked to choose the most useful for people to help the environment among the given three pieces of advice, I will undoubtedly recommend planting trees and creating parks for several sound reasons discussed below.
First and foremost, planting trees and creating parks can purify the air and beautify the environment at the same time. Trees can absorb released gases from cars and factories, which provides us with fresh air. Neighbors are more willing to take a walk outside in their spare time because they can breathe clean air and appreciate the beautiful scenery. Actually, more and more countries are getting started to plant trees every year due to its environmental help and other relevant contributions.
Besides, planting trees and creating parks assists to build a suitable environment for citizens nearby. Thanks to trees and parks in the neighborhood, citizens can walk around in the park or go for a picnic in it. Not only can these entertainments enrich people’s life but gives people a sense of happiness as well. For example, I used to live in a place with few frees around. I often felt depressed when walking on the streets. After a while, I moved to a new neighbor with many trees and parks nearby. Exposed to trees and parks, I became more pleased walking on the streets.
Last but not least, other two suggestions both have vital infects in some aspect. Although diminishing the use of plastic bags can enhance the environment, there are still some situations where plastic bags are unavoidable to use. After all, shops can’t stop making a bargain simply for a plastic bag. On the other hand, public transportation can’t always be convenient to go to other places. Under this circumstance, people have no choice but to drive private cars to go out.
In brief, I firmly believe that planting trees and establishing cars is the best alternative in the three actions. It is high time that people joined hands to take actions and embraced a bright future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
... hand, public transportation can't always be convenient to go to other places. Under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, after all, for example, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0054200542 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75459824437 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1487174864 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9523809524 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289892503961 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759739306764 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473699706213 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157882246406 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567371526739 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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