There are myriad factors or considerations which take into that what can we do for good health. As far as I am concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that the best way to stay healthy is by control diet plan and exercise or yoga is an excellent way to stay fit, but nowadays people often forget about their health because of their busy life, in today's life money take place of everything even it takes place of their health now people are in the rush to making money only.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherences to my viewpoint with the example people can control their health and can stay healthy if they have a good diet, people often see food as a way to remove hugger only but if people make a diet chart according to their size they can stay healthy. My experience is an excellent example for this so in India people eat oily and extra spicy food my father has high cholesterol and he daily goes morning walk but did not control their diet as he doesn't know to have a good diet plan can also help him to maintain his health.
Apart from the fact mention above, one should consider another sublet point meticulously pertaining to obtaining huge experiences. The noteworthy refreshing statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country in which majority of people agree with the fact that they daily think about doing exercise but then forget or ignore it because of daily workload to shade more light in this issue according to the research done by Delhi University if people do 10 min yoga daily is can make a huge difference in their life they feel calm in life as a result they don't get angry or flustered quickly this can do great help in people active life.
in summary, by all the affirmation above one should consider that by having a good diet and doing exercise or yoga can make them healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, apart from, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53197674419 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38205947487 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.747911259 48.9658058833 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.714285714 100.406767564 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1428571429 20.6045352989 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227906148875 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118281327187 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694703309985 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145173862133 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161224625247 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 24.5 11.7677419355 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 10.1575268817 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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