Learning is a crucial way for people in the world. Nowadays, people try to study about the method to learn better. I prefer to keep learning by practice and experiences.
Firstly, I can do everything when you are spent time for it. For example, I really like eating and cooking so I always pay attention to asking how to cook these dished. I also observe clearly and answer in my mind how to decorate them. Not only eating and drinking side but also for any aspect I want to know. I try to do it many times because of practice help me more professional.
Secondly, the rich experiences of others help me learn quickly. When they share their stories to me so that I can recognize some things I need to avoid or imitate them. For example, I started to play the piano and I couldn't combine my hands with music. I tried to do this again and again, but I did not complete the song. Then, my sister told me that I need to exercise each hand individually and I did so. That is a great method because I could succeed in my music lesson.
Discovering a bright life is of the goals of people. Each person will find some suitable ways for them to get new information. Now I can improve my learning skills by more doing and listen to others experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... try to study about the method to learn better. I prefer to keep learning by practice ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...mple, I started to play the piano and I couldnt combine my hands with music. I tried to...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32051282051 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47953490793 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.8332574514 48.9658058833 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4705882353 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7647058824 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244043273538 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829328916162 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107847997553 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176202140813 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150598520813 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 11.7677419355 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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