Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family education is the most important foundation to create a good person both physically and mentally. Whatever the age, parents need to have a high responsibility for educating their children.
I disagree with offer parents now that they should educate their children better than in the old days for two special reasons.
First, the training and education of children are not affected by time. Over thousands of years of history, people have improved and are always looking for happiness. The show happiness starts with the family of each of us. Although we have different times of birth, we get the best of what we can become a good person from our parents.
Second, there is no good or worse comparison of education because it depends on the individual's perceptions. For example, in Asian countries, parents educate their children in a traditional, polite way and depend on deciding the older person. Meanwhile, in European countries, parents emphasize independent their children. because of cultural influences, all parents think that is the best way of education they give their children.
In short, I disagree with the above point of view for two reasons. I think to take the best thing you get for your children. Until they mature and become a parent, they will give that best to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, for example, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02764976959 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68807021971 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6306615071 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9285714286 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244764542871 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947656533529 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667273019328 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15259283533 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062582554585 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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