People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Music is a soundtrack of our life. It becomes an inseparable aspect of human life. Therefore, we can see a lot of online streaming music provider and brand new song in radio every day. In fact, everyone has a radio either attach in a car or in the form of the boom box. Additionally, Music develops from time to time and sometimes it defines the decade. We can hear that 80’s is Elvis Presley time or millennium is a mark by backstreet boys songs. I believe that music is ineluctable because three reasons that I would like to elaborate in the next paragraph.
First, music gives theme song for a moment in human life. There is a type of music for every occasion. If you sad, you can hear a mellow song. If you feel naughty you can hear a catchy tune to augment the moment. In fact, there are more songs than the human population. In the end, it becomes primary lifestyle that everyone needed. For example, when my heart broke I listened to Adele song thus I cried my heart out. After that, I felt lighter and ready to move on. That is enormous power to have.
Second, music energizes people. We can see that everyone put his or her headphones at the gym, it motivates the runner, the athlete and gives right mindset for the yoga practitioner. It affects mood hence it make body reacts differently. For instance, if I put an upbeat song, I can run faster just to synchronize with the song rhythm. It becomes an essential part in daily life because music can accompany people do their homework or their job.
Lastly, Music is a form of communication. It established art medium since the ancient time. It uses for people to confess love, to declare war, even to say goodbye. The music contains lyrics and tune that match with the occasion, therefore, it is highly effective language. In my experience, I used music to confessed my love because I embarrassed to told him directly. Not only I was accepted, he also thought that’s romantic.
Ultimately, music cannot be supplanted. It is an essential and involves at every aspect of human life. All things considered, music very important for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65866666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64583059842 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8105690483 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.2333333333 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206441414575 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525229980952 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521934664037 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120923010276 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295697555637 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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