People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a doubtful attitude among some of the people about paying tax and toll to governments. In my opinion, although it seems that governments are wealthy, we must help them in presenting the best facilities to people by giving our toll or tax. That is due to paying tax for an aid to governments, preparing better facilities or infrastructure and having a productive country.
First and foremost, the governments have a huge number source to obtain money and budgets. Nevertheless, they require to catching tax and toll from people for keeping financial sources at a great level. To put it differently, actually, if people don't help states, they become poor. For example, some of the countries in Europe, they do not have any source of energy and income, unless they obtain money from tax and tolls. They must get tax from their people to providing a good life for them.
Second, each of us know, in our life we need to good facilities and infrastructure, so we must provide this situation with helping to our government and country. This does not occur unless you pay your tax and tolls. Otherwise stated, although it is state’s function, we should help together to reach to this matter. For instance, governments for preserving and maintaining good facilities and infrastructure of transportation systems need to a huge budget for providing their costs, so they need financial help from people with paying their tax.
Last but not least, if we pay our tax in regular time, we can help to countries’ economical thriving. Alternatively stated, when we pay our tax and do our function, we can provide a situation that government could invest their budgets on another problems or products. As an example, the researchers in an economic academic institute shown that if people pay their tax in regular time, their countries are more successful rather than other countries
As outlined above, if you don’t have the decision to pay tax. it is an error opinion about paying tax, That is because of the governments are needed to this matter for making a balance in their budgets, maintaining their infrastructures and increasing their productivity.
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...ures and increasing their productivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01944444444 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96880774798 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5832708645 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238233065036 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918416661336 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426536838812 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135566027574 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367023547089 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.