A person should never make an important decision alone
As the people have become more independent in current times; they have started to refrain from involving other people in important occasions and decisions of their life. The prompt presents an argument on whether a person should make an important decision all by themselves or not.I agree to the statement presented in the prompt, that a person should never make an important decision alone due to the following three reasons.
Firstly, the decision making ability of a person is highly influenced by their emotions. Their is a saying that" never make an important decision when you are either happy, sad or angry". This saying holds true, as a person is more likely to make bad decisions when they are not in a neutral emotional state. For instance, a survey conducted in early 2000's provides an interesting insight into this concept. This survey performed among over 100 people who belonged to different professions states that people who had a encountered a bad incident during their morning time, ended up having a bad day. This example illustrates how once incident that impacted the emotional state of a person at a much earlier time of the day lead them to make wrong decisions for the entire day, leading to occurrence of a series of bad incidents as a result.
Further, if a person is making an important decision, then it is very likely that he is not the only one impacted by the results of the decision. Usually big decisions such as moving to a new country or city ends up impacting the people close to the person who is making the decision. For instance, if a person needs to change their relocate to a new place or shift their house, then their wife or children will be impacted as they will need to make similar changes along with the person. Hence, taking such huge decision entirely by oneself is not fair to those people who are also impacted by that decisions. The people close to the person who is required to make the decision need to have a say in the decision.
Lastly, not everyone has the ability to make decisions themselves. This is indeed the case with so many people that they do not have the confidence to make decision for themselves. This maybe mainly because of few reasons such as less experience or insufficient knowledge. For instance, a student needs to chose a set of courses for masters but the student does not completely understand the pros and cons of studying those subjects. This is leading the student to ruminate over the decision for a long time leading to additional stress. The situation in this example can easily be resolved by taking help from the school alumnae or teachers. Therefore, stressing over making the decision alone is not always a good idea.
Some people may say that one should make their own decisions themselves as no one is better judge of their own situations other than themselves. But isn't that exactly why people should involve their family members and close friends in their important decisions? Involving other people in major life decisions creates a circle of well wishers and strong bonds between families; tackling a problem and finding a solution to it makes people come closer and understand each other's situation by putting themselves in their shoes. Involving near and dear one's in difficult situations helps to build a closely nested web of well wishers, as they start understanding your problems and connect with you emotionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2854.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87030716724 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60706623842 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472696245734 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 895.5 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4402705316 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416027003282 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129793121162 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133329420723 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261209620286 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149583440033 0.0645574589148 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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