Print media, including Magazines and newspapers, will soon be completely replaced by internet news source.
Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing time. The technology of the past is being replaced every day, as seen in music recording, mapmaking, and many other areas. Print media is, of course, affected by this change, and many think that paper news sources will soon disappear. But while magazines and newspaper may become less popular, they will probably not vanish completely.
If there is a practical use for a product, then people will continue to buy it. Even though the newspaper and magazines are often unnecessary, there are times when they can be useful, too. Many subway systems do not have mobile internet service, for example, and so passengers read newspapers instead of using their smartphones or computers. Similarly, many countries do not yet have widespread mobile internet access. It will be a long time before that changes, until then, print media will continue to be useful.
Besides being practical, physical news sources are more enjoyable for some people. reading from a screen can create stress, whereas reading from paper can be quite relaxing. Since we access internet news on the same devices we use for work and communication, phones and computers, we are often distracted by emails, text messages, and other responsibilities. Magazines and newspaper, meanwhile, offer an opportunity to escape from the stress of modern technology. This makes it difficult for internet news to totally replace print media.
As long as people want print media, news companies will continue to sell it. Although new technology might grow and physical copies might become less popular, we should not expect them to disappear. And as a newspaper reader, I, personally, take comfort in that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reading
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18411552347 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70412776149 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5286435376 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300073460801 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922659551221 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880998641123 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176106004369 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432022655017 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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