Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of social media and internet network all over the world, mankind can access to variety of news from whole the planet. People can hear variety news and can follow them. One of the materials is still in debate is that whether people should attain to news that have not any affect on their life. While some people believe that people should just follow the news that related to their life, others hold colliding viewpoint. I firmly believe that people also should notice the events that happen in another side of Earth. There are some advantages to this view, and in this essay, I will elaborate on two of my most important reasons.
The first and the most important reason is that consciousness of irrelated events can increase people's wisdom and insight. The people live in the USA, which one of the thrivest country in the world, should know about poverty and war in the middle east. If they preicieve the situation, they can appreciate their freedom, the aminity prepared by their country.
The another notewothy point I want to mention is by knowing about life of other people, there will be created some institusion to help them. In last example, the american people can help to middle east people by several ways. They can gathering money and send to them, share the middle east's pain, and such that works which indicate their accompying.
In sum, I firmly believe that people should know about other human states in another country, and they should not be selfish. Some reason leading me to this viewpont, chief amongst them is people can increase their insights about the world and other people. Aside from this reason, They can give help to people who need that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...should attain to news that have not any affect on their life. While some people believe t...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'gather'
Suggestion: gather
...e east people by several ways. They can gathering money and send to them, share the middl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78156996587 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14514825969 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518771331058 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3584086427 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125354261301 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511982084538 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245430384905 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903260045929 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019381508828 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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