Question: Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. While some people adamantly believe that computers put pressure on people and made their lives difficult. Others, strongly believe that having a computer is like having the entire world in your hand. In my humble opinion, computers are vital device that made our lives more feasible.
First and foremost, the vast majority of individuals would agree with notion that desktops helped people with all kind of communications. On one hand PCs enhanced the personal connections significantly. This is because, computers facilitate how people can get in touch via different ways. Take social media as an example, based on recent statistics, the number of individuals using social platforms like Facebook and Twitter are up two billion people which means that computers are connecting citizens from countries all over globe. Unlike in the past, when computers didn`t exist, getting in touch with a family member who lives abroad was very difficult. On the other hand, desktops enriched the business world through faster and reliable ways of communications. To illustrate more, corporates are now using programs like Skype for business to communicate with its employees based in different continents at the same time which was almost impossible in the era before the invention of computers where mails and telephones were the only available methods.
On top of this, computers offer a wide variety of entertainment amenities. In other words, this invention gather all what we can do in one device. For example, my friends and I struggled in the past to watch movies, especially when going to the cinemas was the only way to watch them. We had to deal with either the high prices of the tickets which we could not afford or with the limited movie genera available. However, today we can watch all types of movies from different countries and in different languages at home.
In conclusion, computers are essential in our life today. Not only do they improve the personal and business relationships, but they also made our life enjoyable by providing us with all kind of amusements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12396694215 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75658621127 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4254563578 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231000960148 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072764634815 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666234026998 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149169776481 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111169196159 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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