Question: Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. While some people adamantly believe that computers put pressure on people and made their lives difficult. Others, strongly believe that having a computer is like having the entire world in your hand. In my humble opinion, computers are vital device that made our lives more feasible.
First and foremost, the vast majority of individuals would agree with notion that desktops helped people with all kind of communications. On one hand PCs enhanced the personal connections significantly. This is because, computers facilitate how people can get in touch via different ways. Take social media as an example, based on recent statistics, the number of individuals using social platforms like Facebook and Twitter are up two billion people which means that computers are connecting citizens from countries all over globe. Unlike in the past, when computers didn`t exist, getting in touch with a family member who lives abroad was very difficult. On the other hand, desktops enriched the business world through faster and reliable ways of communications. To illustrate more, corporates are now using programs like Skype for business to communicate with its employees based in different continents at the same time which was almost impossible in the era before the invention of computers where mails and telephones were the only available methods.
On top of this, computers offer a wide variety of entertainment amenities. In other words, this invention gather all what we can do in one device. For example, my friends and I struggled in the past to watch movies, especially when going to the cinemas was the only way to watch them. We had to deal with either the high prices of the tickets which we could not afford or with the limited movie genera available. However, today we can watch all types of movies from different countries and in different languages at home.
In conclusion, computers are essential in our life today. Not only do they improve the personal and business relationships, but they also made our life enjoyable by providing us with all kind of amusements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12396694215 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75658621127 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4254563578 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231000960148 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072764634815 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666234026998 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149169776481 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111169196159 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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