Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, it is undeniable that computers are essential in order to support people’s lives. Some people argue that computers help their lives easier and more comfortable, while others claim that they make life more complicated and stressful. Personally, I obviously believe that computers make many benefits to people because they help a lot with education and communication. This essay will provide further aspects why I believe in computer’s utilization and more example to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, computers broaden the human’s knowledge horizon. Nowadays, computers have many search engines that allow people to access a bunch of online information, so people today can readily find an answer of their puzzle. Furthermore, most works from school are necessary to use computers, students use a computer to research their homework because it is comfortable to search many accessible data. I can attest this from my experience; When I was an elementary student, I usually used a computer to work my assignments. According to a lot of subjects that I learned in one day, there were many works from different classes such as mathematics and sciences, which all were the research papers. In this case, a computer would be my best tool for working and searching because their searching abilities, which is easy to analyze huge information on online-platform, were proper for student’s works.
Secondly, they allow people to have a faster distant communication. There are many ways that computers are able to easily connect people from another part in the world, such as e-mail and online messenger, so they eradicate a distance between people and allow them to communicate. Accordingly, the more people have convenient communication, the more they know about global news and stories. To illustrate this, when I went to study abroad for a month, a computer is always my first choice for connecting to my family. I used it to send my messages to my mother, and we were able to see each other through video calling. Therefore, because of computers, she knew instantly all about my status, and it is certainly clear to see why computers are helpful for faster communicating.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that computers are beneficial for making life comfortable. This is due to the fact that they support people to broaden their knowledge horizon by their cutting-edge abilities and help to communicate faster with other people in the wide world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26485148515 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03116976562 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1647635349 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261118785424 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948526080596 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068535763946 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175875150401 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627851905383 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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