Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Humans are social animals. Therefore, it is inevitable to live together with neighbors in society. In my opinion, I strongly believe that characteristics which are critically essential to be a good neighbor are being generous and being responsible of others’ rights. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, one of the conspicuous characteristics of splendid neighbors is that they should be willing to help others. In our daily life, unpredictable situations can every time occur such as crimes and severe accidents, and oftentimes, neighbors will be the only ones who can provide important assistances. I can attest this from my own experience; one day when I went to secondary school, my mother stayed alone at home and fainted on the front yard because of the hot weather. Fortunately, my neighbors, who simultaneously walked through my house, saw her and promptly called the ambulance. Eventually, my mother was safe, and that scenario demonstrates how significant of having good neighbors. If my neighbors had not been a helpful person, this would not have happened.
Secondly, another characteristic that equal important to be a good neighbor is responsibility. Home is a place that most people need to have a rest and alleviate their daily stress. Therefore, they desire to have the responsible neighbors who especially care others privacy and security. Moreover, a splendid neighbor will avoid unnecessary intrusions to other neighbors. To illustrate this, when I was a collage student, I moved to the apartment near the university. However, my room had a couple stayed next door, and they often had loud wrangling that trouble my peace and privacy. Those altercations not only disturbed my rest but also my education, and they made me feel unsatisfied to live in apartment.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that being considerate and supportive play a key role on being good neighbor. This is due to the fact that privacy is important for living home, and people should have good supporters to help in unexpected emergencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25655976676 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13538654623 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580174927114 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4858052544 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8947368421 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175124559609 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605529840723 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434827109239 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125933127697 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025845039644 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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