Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that human life and relationship have undergone dramatic changes in the era of technology and modernity. There is a heated debate about the concept that under such circumstance where people prefer to have cyber friends, honesty and truth play a vital role in almost all kinds of relationships ranging from social friends, partners and couples, or any kinds of relationship possible. I firmly hold the view that the positive effects of telling the truth are undeniable and worthy of support. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoints.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that honesty is the main pillar of any kinds of relationship without which friendship will not last long. In today’s progressive world we live, everyone is striving to make an honest, royal, and trustworthy friend who can be reliable and stand by your side in sadness and happiness. Literature is rife with psychological studies that reveal that there is a significant and positive relationship between telling the truth and a sense of confidence and trust. To put it in other words, the more a part of the relationship tells the truth, the more trust will be found in that relationship. Not only telling the truth will enhance confidence, but it also makes the parties of the relationship more reliable and closer to one another. The best example to highlight the importance of being honest in a relationship can be depicted in my long-lasting friendship with Mary with whom I made friend while were high school students. During all these years, none of us told a lie to jeopardize our firm relationship.
Another equally significant reason to be expressed is on the basis of the well-known Persian proverb that says “telling lies will make one’s heart gloomy.” Accordingly, it is obvious that those who are in the habit of telling lies, even the so-called white lie which to me is the same as any other vicious lie, are constantly afraid of getting caught by the very lie they tell their friends or other beloved member of a relationship. Besides, it is undeniable that in most cases telling a simple lie leads to telling a chain of lies which are aimed to cover the very first lie. As a personal experience, I, once committed the mistake of telling my friend a lie which totally ruined our friendship and I still feel a sense of guilt for every moment of my life. If I told him the truth, he would still have been one my best friends and I would not have tortured by the sense of guilt I have now.
To wrap up, considering the above-mentioned reasons about always being honest and telling the truth even if it is not to one’s benefit, I assert that the importance of being honest outshines the sense of guilt one may have after telling a lie. Telling the truth is beneficial and yields positive effects on a person’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, still, well, while, in most cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7797979798 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78935402338 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1511434194 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.176470588 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1176470588 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203694264631 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692891127572 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420953422469 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128145024344 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327335580154 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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