do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
sports and social activities are one of the most important aspects every person's life. sports and social activities should be considered as important as classes and libraries, for they can bring healthy body and mind. many students don't take sports and social activities as serious as they need to. although studying is a vital obligation for students, sports and social activities need to be paid attention to.
a lot of students seat behind a chair, staring to a computer screen for hours and hours. this can bring a lot of physical problems such as eye problems and spinal problems like scoliosis and lordosis , these are some of problems that if not taken seriously can lead to requirement for depression. because physical activities can lead to release of some hormones that make people feel alive and happy and thereby preventing mental problems.
at the other hand social activities and sports make team spirit to grow, causing to gain expertise and skills in communicating and cooperating with people, which may help to benefit from the community that you have joined for lots of reasons including times of job seeking and needing to a network of connections in future. it can also help people practice reducing their unwanted behavioral characteristics after they noticed them. all of us have some negative behavioral characteristics we try to amend by time. we may practice it when we are alone by ourselves, but the best way is to evaluate ourselves in times of being in society and thereby amend our mental health and our souls.
all in all sport and social activities help people to stay healthier both mentally and physically. sports and social activities should not be considered as some luxirious or extra activity in people's lives. these kind of activities should not be considered as a seperate element from every day life and should be paid attention to ,thus receive equal funding supports as classes and libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03726708075 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72411692205 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6560759965 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211342473508 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814585617142 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725574361389 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13071253214 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933004058564 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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