Do you agree or disagree?
You should always tell the truth and must not lie. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
although the decision between telling a lie or the truth may be dependent to the situation, I think we are allowed to tell a lie if we discern it is needed to. telling the truth wouldn’t always be beneficial and some people including me may prefer to here a sweet lie rather (than) the truth.
First of all, telling the whole truth is not always necessary. one of the situations that leads to this kind of conclusion is romantic relationships. telling the whole truth about the details of your previous relationship is one of the signs of not being mature enough, although concealing the substantial truth about your past is not appropriate.
Second reason is that telling the truth to some people is the worst sin you can condemn in your life. some people, especially old people that have some health problems may be affected by bad news. For instance my friend’s grandmother had some heart problems. Her grandfather had an accident and got hit by a car, for obeying the theory of “telling the truth is the right thing” they told the grandmother about that accident. Her grandmother became worried and had a heart attack spontaneously, while the grandfather was perfectly safe and sound the next morning. In similar situations, not only telling the truth is not considered as a merit , but also is somehow committing a crime.
I am one of those people asking my friends not to tell me about sad artificial events. And by that, I mean the events that mostly won’t affect my life and I can not do anything about that if I had known about them. Because when I know about these events, I get extra stress and thereby disrupt my performance in other activities that I should be doing and occupy my mind wherever I need it to be occupied with far more important things.
All in all, I think that telling the whole truth is not always necessary and sometimes telling the truth may lead to inevitable consequences. I think we all have to give some considerations which of them is best to choose. but telling the truth is not a merit in any situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, i mean, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74175824176 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80352564672 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8777398277 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.529411765 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20121293007 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663582102095 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545698558477 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11174796469 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425966026455 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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