Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By emergence of convenience food life has become easier for people who do not have adequate time to pursuit a healthy meal diet. On the other hand, it has caused some irreversible disadvantages which I will discuss about further in this essay. As far as I am concerned, I do not think that growth of convenient food has improved the way people live in any way.
Eating is a man’s routine habit; we spend many hours eating food and a lot of time is consumed to prepare it. Number of meals is different in different cultures, we Iranians eat three main melas a day that consists of breakfast, lunch and dinner. Although we may eat fruits and deserts in between, we eat these meals every day. Our breakfast consists of tea or coffee, fruits, cheese, butter, honey and a variety of jams. Sometimes we serve foods that need to be cooked in breakfast too, like Omelets. Lunch and dinner include cooked foods most of the times. Iranian foods are famous for their exquisite taste as well as time-consuming preparation process. If Supposed we only cook two times in a day; at least five hours a day is consumed for cooking the main food excluding the desert and salads that we are used to having them next to our main meal. By prevalence of preprocessed are precooked food around the world; they have found their way to Iranian cuisines as well. Working moms who are busy with their jobs use convenience food for giving nutrition to their children and relieve themselves of the huge responsibility of preparing the food for their children in advance. Although eating convenience food is not recommended by doctors. Doctors always try to inform people to avoid eating so much convenience food due to the detriments they bring to our physical and consequently to our mental health. Since a healthy mind comes from a healthy body. If our body in not releasing hormones that cause happiness, feeling of confidence, feeling of freedom then we are likely to face mental problem eventually.
However; pre-prepared food doesn’t offer all the beneficial nutrition that our body needs. That is why we see people getting cancer and other kind of diseases are prevailing around the world. With the emergence of convenience and pre-prepared food, it is harder for people to cook healthy food because they have the ease of using convenience food without even bothering themselves to commute to grocery stores or walk through shopping mall aisles to find and buy all the ingredients needed for preparing a proper meal. Somehow advance of sciences and technology in all their forms and ways is making the human kind bone-idle as they have to do less and less for gaining more day by day. And it is not good for their health as they do less physical activity. Doing less physical activity make people prone to spinal disfunctions like lordosis and scoliosis, as well as a weak blood circulation in body that leads to hair loss, sleepiness and tiresomeness. eating unhealthy food which does not provide enough nutrition for growth of our body leads to a reduction in life expectation as well as an increase in cancer and immune system diseases and consequently mental illnesses.
All in all, I would subscribe to the notion that prepared food has made life easier for people of twentieth century with all their businesses and mental preoccupations, but it has not at all improved the way people live in no way. Of course; people live a more comfortable life but on the other hand, this convenience and ease won’t last long as they eventually have to face with many physical and mental diseases due to their eating disorders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, then, well, at least, kind of, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2988.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 621.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8115942029 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67626261664 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479871175523 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 924.3 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.273536869 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8846153846 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19150484508 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573174218655 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566966813165 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15378625692 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516738799702 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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