Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
With the advances in technology and development in technology rate in recent years, the place where children live and grow up can become of great importance. living in big cities can lead to be in the center of the advances in the technology. Although growing up in countryside and smaller town can lead to a more relaxing comfortable life, living in large city has its’ own advantages. Children living in big cities can be aware of changes in technology and thus enhance their creative mind.
Firstly, children growing up and living in large cities tend to be smarter. Large cities will provide children with more facilities that leads to their mental and intelligence growth. Children will benefit from these facilities to learn lots of new skills and broaden their perspective. Living in a large city causes children to be susceptible to new advances in technology. They can see newly launched computers, game consoles, smart phones, etc and they can gain the ability to use them. They can come up with new innovative ideas and it can provide them with an incentive to put an effort into learning and trying more and more. Personally, I can feel the difference in children that has grown up in towns in comparison to children that has grown up in large cities among our relatives. Children who grew up in larger cities are more flexible and can conform to the society with ease.
Secondly, a lot of important events are mounted in larger cities. When living in a large city you can benefit from vast of facilities that are surrounding you. Large cities have more entertainment sites for children. They can gain a lot of skills by attending in numerous classes and participating in events that are held in these cities.by taking part in these events not only can they entertain themselves but also, they can realize to respect other cultures and nations. When asking one of the smart child’s mom about the reason why he was so easygoing she said that her son has seen a lot of diverse culture’s in an event that is held annually in their city, so he had the chance to meet with a lot of foreigners who were participating in it and got the chance to make a lot of friends. She said that her son is in touch with them regularly and associating with them has made him respect other cultures and learn a lot about them. Additionally, living in the abundance of information can help children to find their field of interest easily.so they will have less problems searching for the field they are willing to study academically.
All in all, considering all the benefits and downsides of living in a large city, I would argue that the benefits of living in a big city outweigh the downsides. Living in big cities can lead the children living in them to be in the center of growing technologies and can help them to ascertain and absorb these advances and become more intelligent consequently. Large cities with their high skyscrapers and picturesque urban areas are definitely the most advantageous places to live in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...grow up can become of great importance. living in big cities can lead to be in the cen...
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Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...lity to use them. They can come up with new innovative ideas and it can provide them with an i...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt events are mounted in larger cities. When living in a large city you can benefit ...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ld of interest easily.so they will have less problems searching for the field they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 96.0 52.1666666667 184% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73364856321 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434285714286 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.353087031 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.863636364 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8636363636 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158963753688 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645902204564 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045321067494 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107472085134 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341287006386 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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