Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
At the society nowadays where parents can more easily opt for children’s environment than the past, the simply recognition lends to our discussion on which environment—countryside or large city—is more beneficial to children cultivation. Although countryside has been praised by its fresher air, comfortable lifestyle, and rural spirit, I personally suggest it is better for children to grow in large city.
The first aspect to point out is that modern children should get used to lifestyle with high pace. Born in twenty-first century, young people are facing the world full of rapidly changing technology. It is undeniable that they should keep up with innovative events happened around the world to make sure not to fall behind others. Encountering and following the latest inventions, business or knowledge can improve their competitivity. To reach that, large city is absolutely a better choice than countryside.
In addition to that, large cities are with material prosperity, which is instrumental to education. Without a shadow of doubt, education is one of the most essential issues parents concerning about. Not only do schools in the city provide more resources such as teachers and materials for students to exploit, but also students can learn with peers who will do the jobs more similar to one another.
Another point worth introducing is that growing up in large city can make children earlier to adapt to the city life. As a matter of fact, most people inevitably enter the city to find jobs or chase dreams after graduate from schools. Given that they need to live in the big city sooner or later, it is definitely better for them to dwell in modern places since young.
On the whole according to the above-mentioned points and details, it is crystal-clear that growing in large city is better for children, in my vintage sights. They can enhance their competitivity, enjoy more favorable resources, and explore the city lifestyle earlier in their lives. It is high time that we brought our children, if possible, to big city to live for their brighter future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19061583578 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02471025533 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58357771261 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7967580548 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223608824464 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722221920858 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573751158714 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124817752838 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452819794595 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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