Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Most people want to live in a large city. There is an environment for good education for children. I disagree with the following statement that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. I have three reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, there are many opportunities for education and cultural activities in cities. Ever since, education is the most important for children. Adults work hard to get a good education for their children so they prefer to live in a large city.Furthermore, if the educational environment is good, there are many opportunities for various cultural activities; thus, this can have a good influence on children. For example, my parents moved to Gangnam: one of the best cities in South Korea, when I was in the first grade of middle school to get a good education. Before, I studied in Haengdang-dong, it is not a bad place for studying but I came here because Gangnam is the best place to study in Korea.
Secondly, large cities have convenient transportation systems. They have a good educational environment, so many students study and come from other cities. Hence, convenient transportation can keep students from losing their time when they go to private academies or schools.
Lastly, large cities have many shopping malls and markets. If students study hard they will be hungry, so they must eat snacks. I like to have many restaurants because I often eat outside. Another reasons, students relieve stress by buying things. Having many shopping malls,that help students study harder.
In conclusion, I think children must live in a large city. There is an environment for good education for children, a hassle-free transportation and shopping malls to relieve your stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06462585034 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99716226255 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503401360544 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9243003226 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3684210526 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216983920888 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845179173554 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138334431317 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159099804809 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177565047451 0.0645574589148 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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