Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
The place of live is a factor that effects on the future of each person. Nowadays people track the way which reach to the success. Therefore, the parents have a think which their children should study in big cities because from their opinions these cities has more facilities which cause their children have a light future. Others stand at the other side of the continuum, believing that kids can improve in the countryside. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former perspective. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, life in the big city cause children experience things that no being in the countryside. Usually, big cities have a more budget for operating amusement park, cinema, gym club, learning assist tools and such in. These things cause kids have enjoyable time in during day. Actually by hobbies children can effectively learn. An example can drive this fact and notion home. When I was a kid, my family migrated to the Tehran, This city was bigger than my pervious city. I remember our house was located in the city center and we had accessibility to everything. When we lived in the city I had 14 years old, therefore, I must go to the school. I remember that my school had an electronic board which it was a wonderful apparatus for me. Better to say that, this board was a hobby tool for children which could learn better, consequently, when the teacher used of this caused the children gave the high score in their lessons. As you can see, a series of things which find in the big city how to improve ability of children.
Secondly, in the big city the number of people who alive in it is numerous and this situation causes the domain of relationship is extensive. Moreover, extent of communication makes a chance for people have a great time with together. To further illustration, I would like to define a memory. Last year I migrated to the Toronto for continuing my education, when I arrived to the city I had a bad feeling, because in this city everyone is foreign for me. Before immigration I lived in the Manitoba that was the small city, but in this city I had a lot of friends. After few days I could find a new friends in the university<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="the "></span> which it caused I have sweet feel. Day passed I realized that we can find a more friends in a big city like Toronto, due to in these cities the expansion of communication is very huge, therefore these cities make opportunity for people have a many friends which help them in the bad situation.
All in all, having all the reasons and examples into account, I believe that big city has more advantages rather than small city, because these cities provide a conditions for studying children and having a good communication
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he success. Therefore, the parents have a think which their children should study in bi...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to assist'
Suggestion: to assist
...sement park, cinema, gym club, learning assist tools and such in. These things cause k...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'been 14 years old'.
Suggestion: been 14 years old
...everything. When we lived in the city I had 14 years old, therefore, I must go to the school. I ...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...bby tool for children which could learn better, consequently, when the teacher used of...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...ends. After few days I could find a new friends in the university ^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a condition' or simply 'conditions'?
Suggestion: a condition; conditions
...mall city, because these cities provide a conditions for studying children and having a good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74134419552 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0292698718 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498981670061 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8000143369 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.12 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114745346871 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352727796139 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359120356384 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826869307271 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311563860769 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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