Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that in this era with technology and social media keeping people away from each other, maintaining old relationships is crucially worthwhile, while others believe that making new friends is always better. There are arguments both for and against each of these statements, but in my opinion maintaining old friendships is always the best choice.
Keeping old friends is more important that making new friends. because they are old friends that can save us in rainy days, We have already proven our honesty and integrity to them and have won their trust. Winning people trust and building an affectionate relationship is not a one-day work. It takes days and maybe years for people to make friends and build new relationships based on honesty and trust, thus keeping old friends is really an important issue. Taking the time to win others trust and honesty is a time-consuming task. Allegedly, you can damage a trust of a thousand years by just one wrongdoing. For example, I had an urgent need for a lot of money last year, I asked a lot of people but no one was willing to devote me the money, then when I asked one of my close friends for that money, she spontaneously gave that to me for that she trusted me and she knew that I was the kind of person that would not take the money if I really didn’t need it to.
Despite the above arguments, making new friends is necessary from time to time. For example, in the times of migrating to another country when you need to ask for advice, when your old friends are not accessible, it is always good to make new friends that can help you mingle with the new country’s culture. You can always ask for a piece of advice, you can communicate with them in the times of loneliness, you can ask their advice where to buy a furniture or how to rent a house. Making new friends and establishing a network can be beneficial. Getting people to know you more may lead to a notification for a job vacancy in their company or a sale in their neighborhood. Even getting notified of such little things can arise numerous opportunities and lead to prospering in career and personal life.
Based on the arguments above, I would argue that the benefits of keeping old friends overweight the benefits of making new friends. Although it is always better to keep old friends as well as making new friends. If any of them are needed to be preferred, I would argue that maintaining old friends would always be the best choice. Old friends are like the jewelry that help us in the times of predicaments, without them we could not conquer the hard days without hardships, they are not gained in one day to be lost easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...more important that making new friends. because they are old friends that can save us i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61924686192 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64653529865 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44769874477 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4382629489 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.210526316 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225729905992 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944913444649 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958916156532 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143448741251 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324004497809 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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