Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
History of mankind gives instances of friendship from young to the old. Human beings cannot survive without a company in whom he/ she can confide. Beginning with the nursery stage of school till the age of retirement man, either maintains his group of friends or try to make new ones depending on the situation. friends are soulmates with whom we share our joys and sorrows and ask freely for help. I believe that it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
old friends are those whom we get at a young age when we were innocent and hence those friends will remain true and trustworthy throughout our life without any kind of expectations. such companions are those with whom we would have shared and spent most of our childhood days. For example, in my seventh grade, I found one of my classmates to be more helpful compared to other students in the class. she remains as one of my best friends even after twenty years. though we are in different parts of the country, the value of our friendship has not diminished.
Furthermore, childhood friends are known to our family which results in adequate bonding with the family members. Just because there are a greater number of people to watch the behavior, the tendency to fall into bad habits are less. A group of friends share a common behavior and thus, if one person in the group has decent qualities, it will be imitated by all the members of the group. Therefore, everlasting friends do not commit sins often.
Nevertheless, if we tend to make new friends, we might not be in a situation to know whether they can be trusted or not. Statistics reveal friends made at the teenage turn out to be rivals due to selfishness, ego and other kinds of attitude formed during the adolescent stage of development. such companions at that age lack maturity and hence find it difficult to deal with problems.
To put in a nutshell, the facts can be reiterated that than long lasting friends are those who is known to a person from childhood days. even though we come across many people in our day to day life, old friends are the best and will never compensate the new ones we tend to make in our lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60814249364 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5127558216 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2415191409 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182113164041 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657699212147 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108500495451 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10952985096 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768025067347 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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