Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Friends are the treasure of everyone’s life and everyone has to make sure that they are in touch with their friends. Personally, I agree with the statement that the old friends have higher priority than the new friends. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, old friends are those who have been your real support when you have asked for someone to be next to you. They have guided you along your way to achieve heights and have saved you from dropping in the valleys of danger. They have seen you growing and would know what is best for you. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago, when I was going to start my college, I was in great dilemma to either go for science degree or management course. Although my interest was to become a famous scientist one day, but I was forced by my parents to go for a management degree and then join my father’s business. I tried to convince my parents, but to no effect they were un-turned. When I discussed this with one of my old childhood friend, he helped me to talk to my parents by revealing that how I used to take interest in science class during school, in addition, how I use to stood first in every of science assignments and exams. Consequently, my parents got convinced with his suggestions and I enrolled my science degree at one of the renowned universities. This clearly depicts that if my old friend would not have come to my rescue, I would not have been a famous scientist today.
Secondly, old friends are those who will come to your help if you will be in danger anytime. They are next to your parents who understands you. They are the people with whom you have grown till date.
For instance, I would never forget the help which my father’s friend offered him when he needs it the most. My father started a new garments business with a though to improve family’s financial condition. Though in initial years the business boomed and we were getting great profits, but with increase of market competitors with introduction of big multi-nationals to the market, we were not able to handle the competitions and sales dropped a lot. My father was in debt and there were no route in front of him except to reach to his old friends to offer some financial help. As soon as, my father’s old friends heard about this, they instantly planned to help my father in this financial crisis. Moreover, they also made sure that my father don’t have to pay interest for the money they will lend him to come of this crisis. This indicates that if my father would have old friends, our family would have been in a bad financial situation today.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that we should give much importance to our old friends. This is because they are your real supporters, and because they are the people who could help you out in any of the crisis.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as for, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56356736243 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58570494039 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46110056926 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.133215143 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.08 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195374813716 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706675767364 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673980811129 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145886863001 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060790956238 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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