Read and think about the following statement:
The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Average age of a student who attends college is 19. It marks an onset of age that leads to adulthood. Some breezes through the pressure in college while others find it daunting that can be totally misinterpreted as the worst years of a person’s life. I support the statement that college is the best years of a person’s life.
First of all college provide the initial step towards independence from the protected umbrella of parental guidance. As the first step in college is to leave home and live in the dorms inside college, a student has to figure out its responsibility and manage it all alone. Some students could only afford college through student loan. Therefore, they need to manage their college curriculum with a temporary job. Initially some might find it difficult to deal with but later they learn to embrace it and enjoy it.
Secondly, it provides you ample amount of experience to mold future career. College provides enough internship experience and courses for a student that opens job opportunities. College provides various activity that a student can take up which would help in determining their future career. The diverse activities bestow fun and gathers like-minded people.
Finally, college has cornucopia of ethnic diversity that opens up doors for new people, culture and cuisines. College is an educational institution which attract people from around the globe with its great academics and diverse curricular. Therefore, in college one gets to know about the culture of different countries that opens up the door to new experiences.
Although college life is a tough transition for a student, but the experiences that a student has, creates one of the best moments in a person’s life. The initial independence, the happiness of landing a job and making new friends brings out the best years in a student’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16721311475 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.899543561 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0763938421 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197885458272 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731454315217 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108232931923 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118324827733 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811786209954 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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