Smoking must be restricted in public areas. I strongly agree with thise because many peoples show interest to smoke even though it cause detrimental effect on public health as well as environment.
Firstly, smoking in public places will lead to many hazardous health issues on smokers and non smokers. When people's smoke, the dangerous fumes from the ciggretes will go to the respiratory tract and causes cancer. For instance, if a person smoke in park, the bypasser or people who surround with the smokers inhale that fumes so restriction on smoking will reduce health issues of public. Moreover, public smoking can affect on young people to addict on it. Children and youth perceive smoking is one of the factor to enjoy thus they may practice and addict it. The recent studies has shown that Young generation are prone to smoking addition when they see smokers very often.
Secondly, The another reason to use cigarettes is deleterious effect on environment because thise can cause air pollution. The overwhelming numbers smokers at public space will generate harmful fumes from the cigarettes which contribute air pollution. For example, it was already reveled by who in his reports smoking can lead air pollution. In addition, smoking creat very discomfort in nonsmokers If any one smoke in public. Because of order which generate from cigarettes while smoke, sometimes it cause nause, headache, irrtation and discomfort to the who stand next of the smokers.
To conclude, ban on smoking in public place will solve alot of problems especially in public health as well environmental issues
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19691119691 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60954165839 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3565488514 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214875898203 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089564029796 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637384971988 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161118741495 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521486230967 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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