In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea?Support your opinion by using specific reason and examples.
People work to make money. they work so that they can pay for rent, food, clothes, and have fun with the friends or family. working is not only to make money but it also helps in confidence and independence. it makes one feel independent when we work without depending on anyone for our daily needs. In some countries, teenagers have part time or jobs while they are students. I do think its a very good idea. it teaches the students the importance of hard work and money.
one gets know the value of money when you start earning it. Otherwise one wants to spend the money extravagantly. As a teenager i never had a job i was completely dependent on my parents for my simple needs and even for the pocket money. when ever i wanted to go out with my friends i used to ask money from my parents. which was pretty frequent. And not only going out i even used to spendthrift on shopping. I never understood the importance of hard work until i finished my studies and started earning on my own. that was my changing point i got to know the importance of money and hard work. I got to know that spending recklessly will not earn you anything. one has to spend money carefully so that it can be used properly as it has to satisfy the primary purpose of life and then later secondary.
earning also gives a student a state of confidence. I have seen youngsters who earn are very confident with their attitude. they can easily talk among crowds which improves their communication skills. The students who start earning when they are teenagers have a clear picture of what they are going to do with their future. As they get to try internships at various places so they know from the starting what they like and what they dont. it helps in making and securing their career and also the jobs which they love doing.
earning makes one independent. it shows the ways of survival in the world. one does not have to beg for money they can make their leaving by doing small jobs. one of my friend had a part time at ice-cream center. she was never dependent on her parents for her pocket money. she used to earn her own pocket money to spend for her small needs like books, or any cultural fees. she would also have small savings so that she could save at least some for her college instead of burdening her parents completely.
finally, I think earning is a good idea as it teaches the student the value of money, the importance of independence and confidence. And also helps the students in deciding and shaping their future.
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...burdening her parents completely. finally, I think earning is a good idea as it t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, so, then, while, as to, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48051948052 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4090121456 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445887445887 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2217372194 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6875 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28125 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164686420245 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048781827171 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788728715729 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101455925766 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548255332345 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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