Some people believe that competition for high grades motivates students to excel in the classroom. Others believe that such competition seriously limits the quality of real learning.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with

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there are many ways we can significantly enhance students learning ...
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...some believes that competition among the students for higher grades excel there l...
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...s there quality learning, in my views i believes that competition is necessary for qual...
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... my views i believes that competition is necessary for quality learning. my prope...
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...ion is necessary for quality learning. my propensity is because of various reason...
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... various reasons which are as follows. To begin with, competition motivat...
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...n motivates the students in class to get good grads when some students gets the ...
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...he students in class to get good grads when some students gets the good grades ...
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...s like teachers and students appreciates them which give them real happiness and ...
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... them which give them real happiness and encourage them to work hard. also when o...
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...iness and encourage them to work hard. also when other fellow students notice there...
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...iness and encourage them to work hard. also when other fellow students notice there...
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... notice there class fellows who got good grades and appreciation from teachers th...
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...ard for good grades, for instance, here i would like to give my personal experien...
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...xperience when I enrolled in university i was a average students in my studies in...
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...nce when I enrolled in university i was a average students in my studies in the b...
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... enrolled in university i was a average students in my studies in the beginning when I n...
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...e students who receive good grades than i started working eventually,I got better...
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...grades than i started working eventually,I got better score than my classmates whi...
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...es which motivated me to achieve my goal and appreciation from my teachers and f...
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...o achieve my goal and appreciation from my teachers and friends. seco...
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...ciation from my teachers and friends. secondly, competition among student...
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...om my teachers and friends. secondly, competition among students provides op...
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...rang of knowledge from different sources .when student face competition they try t...
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...student face competition they try to get unique knowledge for this they read many...
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...oks and other media which enable them to grab more authentic and quality educatio...
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... also which enhance there communication and and interpersonal which makes them more p...
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...so which enhance there communication and and interpersonal which makes them more ...
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... and interpersonal which makes them more prominent among the students which is g...
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...rsonal which makes them more prominent among the students which is good sign fo...
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... good sign for students to learn more. In conclusion,competition for higher gr...
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... to learn more. In conclusion,competition for higher grads is more significant im...
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...es which improves there necessary skills to get quality education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37542662116 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83478278362 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488054607509 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.643065998 48.9658058833 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.5 100.406767564 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8333333333 20.6045352989 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.45110844103 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318647211408 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18106395512 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983006589286 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227505015405 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869796926025 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 11.7677419355 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 58.1214874552 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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