In modern days, world become highly competitive and people become very busy with their jobs. Due to this fact, it becomes very difficult for parents to manage time for their children and whenever they can, they should have quality time with their kids. It is a controversial question that how the free time should be spent - by playing games or doing schoolwork? As far as I am concerned, I prefer to enjoy time with children by playing games at free time. To substantiate my point of view, I would like to present some reasons in following paragraphs.
The first thing that comes to my mind is to make childhood memorable. Childhood is the most precious period of a person's life. Parents would grow older day by day and happy times with them would only prevail at the end. As parents are very busy nowadays, a child might feel lonely and of course it is parents duty to manage some quality time with kids. Doing schoolwork at free time would not allow kids to be open at free time and they might feel pressure of study at that time also. Therefore, let the kids have some fun, by playing indoor or outdoor sports which would be beneficial for both his mental and physical health.
In addition, parents can also teach ideas to their kids while playing with them. There are so many things that can be used as a learning tool and to develop mental growth of child with fun. For instance, recently my colleague bought a jigsaw puzzle for his daughter and at free time both the dad and daughter work together to solve the puzzle. After three long hours, they successfully build a castle, which makes the time very enjoyable and fruitful. Thus, playing with puzzle or chess or other tools can help kid to learn something and enjoy the moment with parents.
Moreover, a kid has to allocate much of his/her time for study. He/she has to attend study, finish his homework and attend exams regularly. A recent statistics conducted on our city shows that, most of the children suffer serious illness due to continuous pressure of study both in school and home. In school, teachers have the responsibility to guide kids with study and course work, and therefore, it is not required to involve parents with kids' assignment. Rather, they should be allowed to enjoy free time with kids by playing games without taking any pressure.
To wrap it up, every kid should have the opportunity to have some quality time with their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ldhood is the most precious period of a persons life. Parents would grow older day by d...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ght feel pressure of study at that time also. Therefore, let the kids have some fun,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68852459016 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34450480247 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503512880562 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0544709388 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336112069485 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101022909798 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691866595825 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212437175072 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610792046148 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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