Changing in life is inevitable, especially in contemporary times when people are always enthusiastic about finding new. In our society, it is not freak that some people believe in alternating, therefore they consistently looking for up-to-date. On the other hand, some people do not interest in changing and used to lead a constant life. As a passionate person, I always support change. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and explain with comparison.
To begin with, following a similar and straight lifestyle, the people who are used to follow this trend try to avoid the risk and also like better to stay in a safe place and the job. For example, in Bangladesh, most young people are interested in public service because they think that it is secure and no hustle and bustle as a result they can live peacefully. Moreover, identical life makes people boring and sometimes creates mental sickness to people.
On the other hand, not only me but also a huge number of people who like a venture's life, therefore they like to change their everyday life with finding and doing new tasks. It helps to gain new knowledge and enhance the possibility to grab a new opportunity. For instance, as I am working as a computer vision engineer, I always try to solve real-time problems in a different manner from a different perspective, as result, it helps me to be up-to-date with new technology and opens a door to have a better job. Furthermore, it will break the limitation of earning wisdom and makes people more confident. In addition, it is indisputable that the behavior of society is changing day by day, hence changing myself will help me to cope up with society and also make me mentally strong so that I can face any difficulties.
In conclusion, to sum up, all the points above, it is clear that evaluation comes from those people hand who believe in changing, this is why I always with switching and want to get new experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ventures'' or 'venture's', 'venturis's'?
Suggestion: ventures'; venture's; venturis's
...also a huge number of people who like a ventures life, therefore they like to change the...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... always try to solve real-time problems in a different manner from a different perspective, as result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80243739166 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1736054182 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0714285714 5.45110844103 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245815716568 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850156261948 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818314622162 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141329311282 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654007019758 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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