Nowadays, social media play an extremely important role in almost every person’s life. Personally, I prefer to post photos and other information on social media than to keep it private. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, when you upload a picture on social media, such as Facebook and Instagram, it remains there unless you delete it on your own. In other words, were your photos from all of your devices to be lost, such social media can serve the function of a backup place. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. A few years ago, I travelled to Spain with my brother. Needless to say that we took hundreds of photos of various places and monuments. On the last day of our trip I lost my phone ,and as a result, I lost all the photos and the information stored in it. However, I had uploaded my favorite photos of this trip on my instagram profile. So, even though my phone was gone, I still had a couple of photos as a memory from this unique trip.
Secondly, when people keep record of their experiences by making various posts on social media and uploading information, such as which are they hobbies and interests, it might help them find other people with common interests. In particular, it might prove to be helpful in broadening one’s circle of friends and acquaintances. For instance, when I uploaded different kind of photos of historical buildings I had visited, many people who were also interested in the same buildings and places in general contacted me. In this way, not only did I have the opportunity to communicate with people who had the same interests as I did, but I also met some travel partners. Therefore, had I not posted these photos on my social media, I would have never met these amazing people with whom I have visited the most exciting places and I have had the most interesting conversations in my life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that one should share his experiences with others by posting photos and other kind of information on social media. This is because not only do social media work as a safe place to keep them so that they are not lost if something happens to a device, but in this way people get the chance to make new friends as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in general, in particular, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57073170732 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59076748188 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1925447588 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22494451821 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705896205025 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748163986642 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141928850714 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273984750896 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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