No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of saving our memories with photos or notes and posting them on internet websites. If I were forced to choose, I would defiantly select to keep my experiments in public. It is my firm belief it will give me benefits in the future for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, keeping your experiments every day especially in your fieldwork can attract more specialists to obtain new knowledge from your experience. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. before five years, when I started my work as a civil engineer on multi projects site, I forced a lot of new cases in my field, so I started to record these new cases by taking pictures and writing some notes on the picture, then I started to post my work on many websites for workers in my field and I made a lot of discussion about this work If it right or I can make any change. As a result, I got new information from specialists in my field, Also the junior engineers took new knowledge and have shown new work. Meanwhile, I made many new friends in my field from different countries just by posting these photos. If I had the opportunity to post these cases on other websites, I would have given a chance for more people to learn new things.
Secondly, posting your memories on social networking sites can give you faith and passion to complete anything you have started to do. Drawing from my own experience. One year ago, I posted on Facebook that I have started studying for a master's degree, so nowadays I felt discouragement because of stress and work conditions, but when I saw this picture with pretty text written by me. Consequently, I got a new motivation to continue my journey with this long trip of study and complete my passion to get this certificate.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that saving our memories can make a lot of things easy than before by reviewing them in the future. This is because can helps in get new information and make new friends in your field, and can give you the chance and motivation to finish your work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...fluenced by my own personal experience. before five years, when I started my work as a...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...lot of discussion about this work If it right or I can make any change. As a result, ...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...them in the future. This is because can helps in get new information and make new fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56565656566 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65646963762 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.599698067 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783800795338 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030943635463 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342637997359 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456061667008 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022139502665 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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