No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of travelling using director to the trip. If I were forced, I would deinitely select moving guided by a tour guide to extablish a schedule for the tour. It is my firm belief that tour guide has enormous pros to the group for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, trips and journeys have some risk if there is no leader for them, especially if the trip is either in new or anonymous place. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Three years ago, I participated in a tour to visit a valley in my country, this valley has massive risky rocks and awkwardness characteristics. On top of that, it has some movable sand which makes difficulty in moving, so for this type of trip you need someone who have a decent expert to deal with these features. Therefore, the leader called Zaid helped us toward moving in the precise steps to deal with each risk in the place. However, the leader has many attributes like cleverness, patient and leadership, all these features made our trip perfect. If the tour guide had not involved with us, we would have not completed this tour.
Secondly, Expert leader has more knowledge and valuable information for saving time and cost for each participant. Drawinf from my own experience. Six years ago, I involved in a tour around America to visit seven states, if I made this trip by my own, it will cost me more than 2000 dollar, but by the aid of the corporation and the tour guide it costs me only 700 dollar and saving any waste time will happened because the absense of knowledge. In addition, because of his knowledge the leader put a schedule to visit the most famous places with suitable transportaion methods, Also he offer a convenient places to stay.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that tour guide is paramount part of each trip. This is because leader has more expert to deal with each situation and can save money and time for the people in the trip.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...and the tour guide it costs me only 700 dollar and saving any waste time will happened...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...0 dollar and saving any waste time will happened because the absense of knowledge. In ad...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
...suitable transportaion methods, Also he offer a convenient places to stay. In conc...
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Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...ion methods, Also he offer a convenient places to stay. In conclusion, I strongly f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58933333333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55735140765 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522666666667 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6040690957 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119581893912 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455081130559 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421517048706 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857056585827 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427972351971 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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